Have you ever had somthing important to you, and you almost can't get over it? Well if you haven't, I have. The first important death, is my beautiful cat named, "Shadow". He was my world, my reason of life, and when he died I just didn't know what to do. So I did what any one would do. I cryied. I cryied so hard that my uncle had to stop me from trying to dig him up in their back yard.It was a terrible & tragic death. luckily i have a new cat that looks just like him, her name is "Fur Ball". But every day I dream about him hoping one day I can see him once more. The second death was even more hurtful it was my "Granny" she was the important person in my life. She puts the Nearest in "Nearest & Dearest". She is the shine in my eye. But when she died I really didn't know what to do. All I now is that shes in God's hands and shes in a better place than what were in. The song that reminds me about her is the Jamie Foxx song
"I Wish You Were Here".
This goes out to you Granny.
I miss you!!!!!!
try to make the story scary really scary and also expand it. the story is really good but give a twist.
ReplyDeleteKobi, my son had a similar experience with his first cat. It was very hard for him.
ReplyDeleteNakayla, great feedback. Could you suggest a part that would be good to expand?
hey Kobi my dog died 3 years ago and the next day I had too go barry my grandfather. But I will always remeber them.
ReplyDeletethanks but im still havin hard feelings about it so i just dont whant to talk about it right now. I'll tell u when im ready. Thanks for trying though. see ya.
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